Undergrad Heros page 4

I have read over some of the pages and i do like the art, but i feel that the main character is a bit "ordinary" and that maybe trying to increase his emotions a bit would help a lot. When the car splashed him with water the panel after that looked like he was more bored that agitated, sad, or upset. If you were going for that then i can understand but i get a feeling you were not. the story so far is really interesting, and I like how this page is! Mainly what i have to say is watch out for emotions.